Confluence…….
June 1, 2011The world is so beautiful tonight
I know the reason why I am alive;
The beautiful moon and shining stars
will be the witness
for the confluence of two souls tonight…;
let’s mingle our bodies
let’s mingle our hearts..
let my blood flow into your veins
like two rivers flowing into each other,
I will colour my feelings with your love
I will wear your existence on my body
come closer..let our breaths colloid,
A west wind passes our hearts making us heavier,
we fly higher and higher..an odyssey together,
the extreme ecstasy, when two souls melt into each other
in the confluence of eternal spiritual love…!!!!
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Rupam, I quite liked your connecting to the night and wind imagery. however , i think the last line needs no exclamation. The twelvth line should be “come closer..let our breaths collide”. Regards,